Here is my story....
I watched the bear come out of hiding slowly moving into the water getting ready to pounce on a fish. The water moved calmly. I felt relaxation coming over me. I lost concentration of the bear and it wandered off back into the wilderness. I followed its every step making sure not to get caught. My leg got caught in a branch and I fell over toppling down the hill in agony. Then I started to wish I never came. The bear started slowly walking towards me. My heart beat got faster and faster until I lost consciousness.
The end
Hope you liked my story.
Hi Shelby
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing for the 100 Word Story. I enjoyed your piece of creative writing. Did you enjoy doing this challenge? If our class likes to do this I would like to continue in Term 3.
Maybe next time you could include the image you were writing about to help your reader really visualize it!
- Miss Birtch