WALT:gather information from different texts.
This week was Māori language week we had to pick a DLO and put in as much information as we could about Māori people I picked this DLO because it was easy and faster.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 20 September 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Shelby, I really like your slideshow it was amazing. Make sure everyone can see your writing and make sure you change the font and the size.Re-read it and make sure it makes sense because I can’t understand it. Next time make sure your writing is not difficult and that I can understand it also make it stand out more and check for punctuation and your spelling.
ReplyDeletethank you for your comment and I will make sure next time.
ReplyDeleteHI Shelby!
ReplyDeleteYour slide is awesome. You did a good job on your slide and you must have learnt a lot of Maori words! Maybe next time you could add full stops and capital letters om your story on the last slide and make sure it makes sense so everyone can read it. But you did a wonderful job and well done learning those Maori words.
Eden ;)
Thank you eden and i will
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