Hello fellow readers and welcome back to another blog post today I was planning on what to make my script about. A slideshow was shared to us on what to do for planning here is the slideshow and my planning.
I hope my plan gave you a good teaser on what my script is going to be about.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 28 April 2020
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Ka pai, great Shelby!
ReplyDeleteI like how you found some awesome WOW words for your word bank. I look forward to seeing how you include them in your writing. Great effort too, filling in your plan for the story. I like the spicy names of your characters.
Thanks for keeping up your learning from home!
- Miss Birtch
Aloha Miss Birtch,
DeleteI appreciate your comment. I was having a blank moment and couldn't think of any other names. The first dog name that actually came into my head was dirt... As I said I was having a blank moment. Thank you very much for commenting on my blog.
Kind regards,
Shelby