SEXXXY Paragraph 3

 Kia Ora fellow readers and welcome back to another blog post. For today's blog post I will be talking about what I have been doing in English. So as you know in English, I have been learning about SEXXXY Paragraphs. Today we had to work on our third paragraph and this paragraph was based on a picture. There was a choice of two pictures from two different scenes in the movie. This has helped my writing because it has improved how I write my SEXXXY Paragraphs. After we had completed writing our paragraph we had to highlight which parts of the paragraph were which.

Here is my work....

In the movie Hunt For The Wilderpeople, there was this one scene in the image shown above. This scene is around the middle of the movie. In this scene, the audience would have been captivated and interested in what was going to happen next. This scene was important because it showed how important them hiding from Paula and the police officer was. The camera angle of this scene focuses on Ricky and Hec.  Their facial expressions are very vivid. The placement of the characters in this scene exaggerated the dramatic effect of them trying to hide. Overall I believe that this scene was a very important part of the movie. 

Here is my work Highlighted...

In the movie Hunt For The Wilderpeople, there was this one scene in the image shown above. This scene is around the middle of the movie. In this scene, the audience would have been captivated and interested in what was going to happen next. This scene was important because it showed how important them hiding from Paula and the police officer was. The camera angle of this scene focuses on Ricky and Hec.  Their facial expressions are very vivid. The placement of the characters in this scene exaggerated the dramatic effect of them trying to hide. Overall I believe that this scene was a very important part of the movie.

This is what each of the highlighted parts mean...