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Tuesday 14 November 2017

I like Dolphins ask me why??

WALT Write a poem about our favourite animal

 I like Dolphins
I like them.


Ask me why??


Because they love water


Because there skin is slimy


Because they’re blue


Because they swim in the water


Because their skin is soft


Because their cute


Because they like eating


Because their cute and friendly


Because……….


Because……….


That's why I like dolphins.  

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 November 2017 at 12:29

    hello shelby very nice work on this poem i think there is really nothing you need to work on keep up the good work

    Naiema

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  2. Anonymous6 December 2017 at 10:39

    Thank you very much Naiema for your comment

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  3. Anonymous8 December 2017 at 11:57

    hi Shelby, i really like your poem I liked how you described it skin by saying it was blue its skin was slimy. My favorite part was when you said how they were cut and I agree with you. do you think next time you could add a little more detail why you like them.I can’t wait to see your next job.

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