I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 27 July 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Shelby,
ReplyDeleteLooks like you have been learning lots about bees! Your slide is fantastic! I like the bit about how bees communicate with the waggle dance! They look so silly when they do that! Can you think of a title that would make someone want read this information? Like Brilliant Bee Facts or something else that would catch a readers eye?
bonjour Miss Morgan,yes it is funny how they communicate with the waggle dance,could you please help me with some more interesting titles
DeleteAnd thank you for your positive helpful comment
DeleteSome titles could be "Brilliant Bees", "What you didn't know about Bees", "Fun Facts about Bees" - what do you think? Could you use alliteration (words that start with the same letter)? or ultimate guide?
DeleteThanks for the names I used the brilliant bees and thank you for your helpful comment
DeleteHey Shelby,
ReplyDeleteLooks like you have been learning lots about bees! Your slide is fantastic. Maybe you should make the writing bigger or change the font. And also re-read it and make sure it makes sense. Looks like you have been exploring about bees?
hey thank you for your comment and I will.
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