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Thursday 27 July 2017

Brilliant bees

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  1. Miss Morgan22 August 2017 at 08:59

    Hey Shelby,
    Looks like you have been learning lots about bees! Your slide is fantastic! I like the bit about how bees communicate with the waggle dance! They look so silly when they do that! Can you think of a title that would make someone want read this information? Like Brilliant Bee Facts or something else that would catch a readers eye?

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    1. Anonymous5 September 2017 at 09:56

      bonjour Miss Morgan,yes it is funny how they communicate with the waggle dance,could you please help me with some more interesting titles

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    2. Anonymous5 September 2017 at 10:03

      And thank you for your positive helpful comment

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    3. Miss Morgan5 September 2017 at 10:05

      Some titles could be "Brilliant Bees", "What you didn't know about Bees", "Fun Facts about Bees" - what do you think? Could you use alliteration (words that start with the same letter)? or ultimate guide?

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    4. Anonymous20 September 2017 at 11:59

      Thanks for the names I used the brilliant bees and thank you for your helpful comment

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  2. Anonymous17 October 2017 at 11:46

    Hey Shelby,
    Looks like you have been learning lots about bees! Your slide is fantastic. Maybe you should make the writing bigger or change the font. And also re-read it and make sure it makes sense. Looks like you have been exploring about bees?

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    1. Anonymous18 October 2017 at 12:39

      hey thank you for your comment and I will.

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