WALT : recreate a famous artist's painting , while incorporating New Zealand themes and celebrations.
We had to make a poem about Matariki while creating a magnificent picture.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Shelby,
ReplyDeleteI Really Like How You Recreated Starry Night While Putting Matariki Stars In It. I Also Really Like Your Poem and How You Described the Stars. Next Time Maybe You Could Make the Poem Rhythm and Make the Words a Bit Bigger. I Look Forward to See More Work From You Shelby.
From, Alex.
Hi Shelby,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem about Matariki. I really like the way you painted your own picture. Next time maybe you could change the colour of the font.